Hi its Emily from grey main school you got really interesting facts about Camels. Maybe next time add some punctuation and more detail. Apart from that it looks good.
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Hi its Emily from grey main school you got really interesting facts about Camels. Maybe next time add some punctuation and more detail. Apart from that it looks good.
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